丁往道《英语写作手册》第2版考研真题详解 【完整内容点击文中链接获取】
题1 Directions:
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【审题构思】
本题要求写一封书信给希望工程，希望他们为写信人推荐一个孩子接受写信人的资助。因此在内容上写作应该包含三大部分：一、自我介绍以及表明写信的目的。二、写信人对资助对象条件的具体说明。三、结束语。文章用语应偏正式，行文清晰，简洁，要点突出。此外，还要注意书信的格式：称呼，正文，和落款。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
(1)I am a umversity student from a rich family of Shanghai. Recently I read a report about the lagged living conditions of poor children in the westem mountainous China. Those children even do not have cotton-padded jackets to keep them warm in winter let alone enough money for school. As a boy who was bom and raised in an affluent family,
(2)I feel so sorry for them that I decide to make a contribution to the Hope Proiect to help one of them
（3)I hope you can recommend a candidate of child who should be hard-working responsible and optimistic
However, his or her family is impoverished (4)I would like to save 300 yuan of my pocket money every month to support his or her life until he or she graduates from college
(5)Thanks a lot and look forward to your early reply.
【行文点评】
（1）开篇做出自我介绍，表明写信人的身份，以及家庭背景。
（2）so...that...结构，陈述写信缘由。
（3）用who和whose引导的定语从句说明希望资助的对象。
（4）适用would like to 表述写信人的具体捐助方式。
（5）表示感谢及希望收信人尽快回信的愿望。
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题2 Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【审题构思】
本题要求考生写一封建议信给学校图书馆管理员，以帮助他们改善图书馆的服务质量。话题比较贴近实际生活，可写的点很多，比如：开关门的时间，更新书库等。但总体来说应包括三部分内容：引出话题（表明写信目的）；提出建议；希望自己的建议能够有所帮助。行文的重点应当放在提建议上，从各个角度入手提出合理切实的意见，文章的另外两个部分则尽量简洁明了为好。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam
Im a student of our university and also a loyal reader of library. (1)I am writting to provide you some frank and possible uggestions to improve our Iibrary services.
(2)First it would be more thoughtful if you open it much earlier in the momin like 6:30 am, because many students who long formaking use of more time to read have to wait a long time at the gate every day. （3)Second, readers will be very appreciated if you offer hot water in winter(4)Last but ot the least, it would be beneficial to readers f more updated magazines are available, since many of them are outdated.
(4)I hope these uggestions will help us create a better reading conditions for both students and faculty. Tha mks very much
（1）开篇点题，用I am writing to这种常用结构表明写信目的。
（2）用it would be more thoughtful if 提出第一条建议。
（3）用readers will be very appreciated if 客气地提出第二点建议。
（4）使用first, second, last but not the least让建议更具条理。
（5）表达希望和感谢。
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